Pytanie #1:
I have appealed...
I see no harm in this Question.
Can I get support from staff?
Will you comment on my poem?
that guy on first base
better be on my team
I know what you're saying
to you it don't matter
who they've been or
their average as batter
but when they talk to me
outside the pen
I want to know
I have a real live friend
I am the pitcher
I have to be keen
this is my life
when it's here on the green
that guy on first
can't lose eye contact
and the balls
will be coming fast...so
if they happen to be lying
It will split them in half
The answers were very good.
I seem to be getting all my poetry question deleted by the community
answers too...Can you help?
I know what you are saying...but so many other poems on the the site are posted....The comments do help others...
yes I put it in the poetry section
my mom is not allive anymore and ..
will you rate my poem?...is a common question....
Pytanie #2:
Excerpt From"The Bells"
Oh, The bells, bells, bells!
What a tale their terror tells
Of Dispair
How they clang, and clash, and Roar!
choices are:
Personification
Onomatopoeia
Metaphor
similie
Pytanie #3:
What do you lie to write? Poetry; Stories; Articles; Essays; Books?
Do you do it Professionally? Would you like to?
Can you Name something you last wrote?
I meant to say 'What do you "like" to write'?
Pytanie #4:
[Thanks to SIN for the inspiration.]
I wrote a poem that went like this...
Caveat emptor is an empty cavail
The Rube Express has already set sail
The buyers united
keep each other afrighted,
and at last I end up with a sale.
...and tried to sell it online.
The bidding was fierce and contagious
even though it was just my first time.
The bidders leaped nickle and dollar
until halfway over the fence.
and then when they got really outrageous
they switched over to nickels and cents.
At last some fine art lover
spent $100 and fifty on my poem.
A shock when the meter went a cropper
when she finally got the thing home.
So my last online poetry sale
had the dear frightened ones by the tail
till one queen of the rubes
won out by a few pubes
Now she displays my art on a nail.
(How much would THAT one be worth?)
Comments/Offers?
SIN's poem:
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Pytanie #5:
I'm waiting for a statement something like, "Well this so-called poem certainly should be trashed."
On Writing Poetry
by Elaine Polin
Poetry
does not flow
from brain
to fingertips.
Words must be
changed
arranged
exchanged.
At the end
most of them
must be
trashed
Peter, I am still very insecure with regard to talking on this site about my first love--the ocean. I read the Sonnet, but cannot respond to it at this time.
Pytanie #6:
"Where The Sidewalk Ends" is a book of whimsical poetry by Shel Silverstein. If you're familiar with the book, please tell me how many poems are in it. Thank you.
Pytanie #7:
He makes me so happy in how he treats me lovingly, cuddling, spending time but he doesn't ever go out of his way to show me how much he loves me. I've told him that I would like it if he wrote me a love note or something or made me a mixed love CD or sang a song to me. He heard me out and said ok he'll try but he never has it's been a looong time since I first told him that. I gave him a lot of time to do something (more than 6 months) but he never did. When I recently asked him about it I said did you forget about that? He said he did forget and felt bad. Now its been a few weeks and still he hasn't made any effort.
He used to write music and poetry and I've seen these writings.
Just now, in desperation I (guiltily and regretfully) went through an old journal from back before he met me. There were pages of deep writings about his exgirlfriends. It makes me really sad that he isn't inspired to write to or about me...I know that I am his best girl because he's told me so but then a part of me questions this because he doesn't do these things anymore. That part of my brain starts thinking that he's just settling down with me and that this xgirlfriend was his biggest love. Maybe he can't even admit this to himself and is in self-delusion?? He also rarely reveals or talks about his past or anything. The things I read were enlightening as to the thoughtfulness and ability he has to write about his feelings.
I love him so much and would die for him. We get married in may and in the back of my head I fantasize that he is secretly writing me a beautiful love song that he will surprise me with at the wedding but my more rational brain thinks not. I'm afraid that his vows aren't going to be more meaningful than the things he's written about those other girls. I'm afraid of being disappointed and also of putting too much pressure on him if I say anything more.
I know I'm awful for looking in his journal but please just tell me what to do and what I should think of this.
It's unfair to say that I "want him to change" Guys all over this forum want their wife to give them more sex like they used to after having kids and their desire to understand and rectify the lacking in that area is legitimate. I want him to be romantic like he used to be. I want to understand him just like those guys do.
Pytanie #8:
Could someone who really knows their literature translate this poem for me line by line? I did literature at university but its got me stumped.. this is my best attempt - can someone correct it or add to it?
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On not having achieved any poetry for three months at a time when I really could do with the money
I reluctantly start working hard at trying to produce some poetry to put right my financial situation
Food provides the poetry and poetry provides the food - working hard writing heavenly poetry provides heavenly rewards to the writer
To die having written great poetry that has been valued highly by other people is a great way to die and the payback is so great that even when dying one would continue to speak poetry and spend the last hours of life counting all life's experiences in poetry
To give up writing poetry now would be to produce less poetry and to make less money too, which would in turn mean writing less poetry again..
It would mean I lived for nothing - or that my life was insignificant
If I would give up writing poetry
Pytanie #9:
Okay so i have this assignment due tomorrow, its actually not hard, but im not that smart, anyways we have to make a poem from a poem that was already published.
Example if confused (btw this is the original poem)
So long,
So far away
Is Africa
Not even memories alive
Save those that history books create,
Save those that songs
Beat back into the blood-
Beat out of blood with words sad-sung
In strange un-Negro tongue-
So long,
So far away
Is Africa
Okay so my teacher said we had to make one just like that, but it has to be about fear, this is how she told us to do it, i kinda see it like Mad-Libs but it has to make sense!
So (adjective)
So (adverb) (adjective)
(verb) Fear
(adverb) (adverb) (noun) (adjective)
(verb) (pronoun) (adverb) (adjective) (noun) (verb)
(verb) (pronoun) (adverb) (noun)
(verb) (adverb) (preposition) (article) (noun)
(verb) (adverb) (preposition) (noun) (preposition) (noun) (adjective)
(preposition) (adverb) (adjective) (noun)
So (adjective)
So (adverb) (adjective)
(verb) Fear
if you got that, you are one smart noggin!
And if you helped me,thank you thank you soooooooooooooo much!!!!!
I will give you an internet hug!
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no its not me btw, i couldnt find a video of one :]
That was very good, uhm Granny J something, sorry i didnt see your name well, but thank you that was very good. I hope she'll take it..
Pytanie #10:
Someone asked this, but she picked a best answer while I was answering, so I thought I'd ask the question too. Here's my answer:
Um, I don't know if you think this is interesting or not, but:
My name is Sassa (pronounced like Sasha). I am a writer, an aspiring actress, and a singer. I finally published two books...a book of poetry and a novella. One is selling on www.cafepress.com/SassaFanShop and the other on www.cafepress.com/sassysassa
This is my myspace music profile:
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I don't have any way to show you my acting. I also have two kids...a 4-year-old boy and a 2-year-old girl, who are my whole world. I am German, Cherokee, and Irish. I plan to own my own castle one day, which my hubby and I will have built, and I'm going to design it. I'm going to be going to school soon to get my degree in teaching, photography, and interior design. I want to teach high school creative writing, but I also want to have my own photography and interior design business, while still doing the other things I love and spending time with my hubby and kids. I'm a very strange person with a lot of interests (this is my list narrowed down as much as I possibly could.) :) I have a huge bucket list, which I plan to do everything on it. I love cliff-diving, and I want to travel the world one day. I also plan to drive around the country with my hubby and kids one day and stop at all the important stops (like historical monuments, amusement parks, Yosemite National Park, Ripleys stadium, etc.) I especially want to take my kids to Disney World. I've never been. My parents went without me. So I definitely want my kids to be able to go.
Well, I hope I haven't bored you too much. Tell me about yourself now.
@ Ðar†h AlejandrØ™ Yes, actually, that is quite interesting.
@ ｟ｅｍｉｌｙ｠☆ I love Asian culture. I used to be perfectly fine on airplanes, but flying with morning sickness ruined that for me. :) LOL!! And no, you're not a boring nerd.
@ pangela17 Good for you. That's awesome! It's good to have morals, and I look young for my age too, or so I'm told. What do you think? I'm 26.
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@ Sreeraman oh, come on. That can't be everything about you. I'm sure you're more complex than that. :) What are you into? I love sports, video games, art, and several other things.
@ BabyGirl, soo cute. I love those names. I'm addicted to the Sims 2 & 3 and Yoville.
@ Jessica rotflol You are freaking hilarious! You are definitely very interesting! My husband and I speak sarcasm too, but it's basically his only language. :) As for the anime, I made fun of my hubby for watching DragonballZ, but now I'm addicted. Shhhh LOL!
Also @ pangela17 my daughter is either lactose intolerant or allergic to milk. She's 2. She loves macaroni and cheese, so I have to take hers out before I put the milk in and make hers with soy milk. It's crazy because the doctors keep saying they don't think she has a problem with it, but she gets really sick whenever she has milk but not when she doesn't. So I know there's something going on there. She was sick all the time...fevers and everything else. She's a lot better now that she's on soy milk, though.
Pytanie #11:
22. Odysseus's men plugged their ears to keep from hearing sirens' song.
What is the antecedent of "their" in the sentience?
a. Odysseus
b. Odysseus's men
c. ears
d. Sirens
23. Many enjoy reading poetry,plays, and other works of literature aloud.
What is the indefinite pronoun in this sentience.
a. other works of literature
b. poetry
c. Many
d. plays
Pytanie #12:
"The Song of Wandering Aengus" is a(n)________ poem?
a. epic
b. allegorical
c. dramatic
d. prose
Here is the story. Thanks for any help :)
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Pytanie #13:
I'm an italian girl and i would like to know what is italy and italian peolple!I really like america for poetry (beat),music(alternative and rock),film,country,culture!Please answer!
rainbow i live in sicily but italy is really greate even if there are some problems...
Pytanie #14:
Metaphysical Poetry are works that include supernatural or abstract elements in the story, poem, song etc. Any help would be greatly appreciated!! I think my friend picked the hardest literary movement to do
Pytanie #15:
In poetry I have to make a poem comparing me to something humans generally aren't compared with, which is pretty much anything, the universe, pencil, etc. It has to be three sentences, so got any ideas?
Pytanie #16:
I had an old literature book that had the Beatles song Eleanor Rigby in the poetry section. Also, I think some Paul Simon. What about now? What do you like?
Ma, now really, Who is going to laugh at you? Rocky Mountain High!
I know Joseph, me too., about the rap thing. Makes me feel old and settled in my ways not to like it , ;)
Pytanie #17:
Maybe we should do something in her remembrance, like find a poem of hers we like best.
And does anyone have a link to her poetry site pls?
Magpie, you've got to be kidding...!?
David, as J.P. says, she was someone really special
Pytanie #18:
“I Am I”
With Apologies to Cervantes
and to lyricist, Joe Darion and music writer, Mitch Leigh
I am I, not Quixote, no Queen of my world,
My destiny called and I let it unfurl,
I know not the future, but fight no windmills,
With poetry only my last days are filled.
I speak with my words, sometimes sharp as a knife,
But softly I speak of my loves and past life,
And soon in the future, I’ll meld with the sea,
Wish for reincarnation as a dolphin to be.
Thumbs down are not from me; I have a stalker. I have spoken to Yahoo about him...
Pytanie #19:
hey, i have sleep paralysis - quite bad. i sometimes wake up paralysed and with this i can have visual hallucinations and noises, including music and poetry (apparently this is quite rare). lucid dreaming is also common and i've even experienced what seems to be leaving my body before (possibly only another hallucination, i'm not sure where i stand on that yet) and i was wondering whether anybody has had similar experiences, and how to get rid of them. It is really quite scary when you wake up paralysed and i wish to somehow get rid of it as well as hear others experiences on the matter :) thanks
Pytanie #20:
In this lesson, you have become familiar with the essay of definition and the process for writing it. Now put that newfound knowledge to the test by writing your essay of definition on poetry.
Remember to activate the Style and Grammar feature in Word so that you will have advice about spelling and grammar.
will someone make an essay (rough draft) about defining poetry please? ^btw that is what the class says to do
Pytanie #21:
In this lesson, you have become familiar with the essay of definition and the process for writing it. Now put that newfound knowledge to the test by writing your essay of definition on poetry.
Remember to activate the Style and Grammar feature in Word so that you will have advice about spelling and grammar.
will someone make an essay about defining poetry please? ^btw that is what the class says to do
:L i was planning on changing words up lol cuz i don't want them to find it i just need a rough draft
Pytanie #22:
I was asked to write lyrics and this is what I have, I have no idea about this area of 'poetry' so can anyone critique me to let me know how I did?
Awake
Awake, again, like always
Why can't I have one night without a single thought of you?
Asleep, you'll be, like the old days
Why is it that life without me doesn't seem to bother you?
I sit, I stand, roam in the hall ways
Why don't I just pretend, pretend that you're tormented too
and there are a lot of lights on for three o'clock in the morning
You see that's how the rest of us, the rest of us atone
Sure are a lot of lights on for three o'clock in the morning
At least a sleepless night is never spent alone
Yet you
Never look tired, you never look sad
You only look indifferent
You only look indifferent
And you
Always seem fine, almost seem glad
Why can't I feign indifferences?
Indifferences to what we had
And there are a lot of lights on for three o'clock in the morning
You see that's how the rest of us, the rest of us atone
Sure are a lot of lights on for three o'clock in the morning
At least a sleepless night is never spent alone
I'll sleep, I guess, wake in a strange place
As daylight stains the darkness that had before consumed
I've strayed, it seems, I can see no trace
Of the person who existed before the bodies were exhumed
I'll stay, I know, I'll even embrace
This novelty within me but I am nothing but entombed
And there are a lot of lights on for three o'clock in the morning
You see that's how the rest of us, the rest of us atone
Sure are a lot of lights on for three o'clock in the morning
At least a sleepless night is never spent alone
And I'll
Never be fine, never be glad
Never be indifferent
Never be indifferent
And I'll
Always be tired, always be sad
How can I feign indifferences?
When indifferences the only thing we never had.
Pytanie #23:
I've had a website for a little while about my Christian faith, discussing in detail various aspects of it, as well as showcasing some of my poetry. This is my primary goal for it. However, I'm looking to improve it as to possibly attract more visitors. So I need to know, what can I do to improve it? Also, does anyone know a good way to advertise it?
My website is
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Please, only answers that actually constructively contribute to my question. Not people leaving answers about how religion is a hoax or anything like that.
Thank you for your help.
Pytanie #24:
In my opinion, true poet/fiction writers are rare, much like truly ambidextrous people. One inclination is usually stronger and more muscular than the other. Most people can agree that writers of poetry and prose are different breeds in some obscure way, but as for why... What do you think the crucial difference is? (If you agree that there is one.)
Pytanie #25:
Pytanie #26:
Do poet writers write about the past?Or do they have incite into future events or emotions?
Good by.
Thank you for the information.
Pytanie #27:
Ummm.
38%.
k.
Pytanie #28:
Love teh avatar, Semp.
Take care of that little girl.
Pytanie #29:
Hey :) So I'm Rachael I'm 13 and I started grade 10 today, I'm home schooled, and already have all my courses for grade 11 & 12 planned. Are they too arts centered if I want to go for a science degree after school (hoping to a double major B.A. and B.Sc. and then go on to get a M.Ed.) or is it fairly well rounded?
Grade 9
Biology (9)
Algebra I (9-11)
Modern History (9)
Themes in Literature (9)
Grade 10
Chemistry (10)
Plane Geometry (10-11)
Algebra II (10-11)
Grammar and Composition IV (10)
World Literature (10)
Around the World in 180 Days (9-12)
Bible Doctrines (10)
Vocabulary Spelling Poetry IV (10)
Revelation* (12)
Grade 11
Physics
Grammar and Composition V (11)
English Literature (12)
American Literature (11)
Vocabulary Spelling V (11)
Economics* (12)
Genesis* (12)
Pre-Calculus (12-)
Grade 12
Grammar and Composition VI (12)
Vocabulary (12)
Consumer Mathematics (9-12)
Business Mathematics (10-12)
College Level English (Correspondence with local university)
College Level Biology (Correspondence with local university OR advanced home school curriculum)
College Level Chemistry (advanced Home school curriculum)
oh and the (10-12) kinda stuff is the grade level of each course :)
I've also been taking acting class for 4 years and have been in the Advanced Company for 2 years, and I've been taking singing lessons for 3 years I take official music exams (Royal Conservatory) for theory and singing, and in grade 12 will be taking Music History, and Harmony exams.(they count as fine arts credits for public high school students in my province) and compete in my provincial music festival. also, my dad is a graphic design artist and I do a lot of that, I'm almost at a professional level.
thanks for your help!
xoxo Rachael Marie
Pytanie #30:
My taste in poetry is more inclined towards prose, imagery and lyrical poetry. Although any type will do.
Links to sites selling the suggested material would also be appreciated.
Pytanie #31:
I have a thing about writing poetry, nothing too deep but I've been told I'm quite good and I can real them off in seconds. I would love to do something with this but don't have a clue what, anyone got any ideas???
Pytanie #32:
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Pytanie #33:
Ok i know you hate white Masters or people like Hitler,many white people hate them too!
My question is specific and exact though (i bet 99,9% of you out of jealous and envy will fail to answer what i am asking though and will say other full of hate and envy crap)
Are you thankful of these white men who invented all these cures to diseases , all these cures to cancers , cars , TV , Cinemas , all the music instruments , notes , drama , poetry , architecture ,philosophy , democracy , boats , airplanes ,internet , telephones , ovens , and so many other things we all use on a daily basis?
Asnwer what i am asking if you got the guts ;) lol
Pytanie #34:
I've just signed up for a tumblr blog, and I decided I would turn it into a sort of creative writing/poetry blog. And possibly photography. I'm going to go to different social networks and things every day and ask for an idea of what someone would like to read about. So, I chose Yahoo Answers tonight. What would YOU like to read about?
Whoever's idea I like the most will get the best answer, and the story will be up on my blog tomorrow. ZombieAngel.tumblr.com
Anne R: I'm sick of that stuff too! It gets quite old after a while. Twilight and all that stuff has just ruined practically everything.
Pytanie #35:
So for my writing class I have to write a high school drama...ugh. I'm working on characters at the moment, but since I can't add any awesome powers or blood-thirsty diets to make them my own, I need some help to make them interesting. They're probably ridiculously cliche at the moment, and it would be really amazing of you if you could tell me what you think and/or help me make them more interesting.
Kiara Dawn
-outgoing personality, has many friends
-loves to party, a bit of a rebel
-pretends to not care what others think about her
-the one that truly understood her - her dad - died a few years back from cancer, and ever since then she has become a rebel
-mom is constantly disappointed in her for not being more like her studious brother
-has a secret passion for the violin - very talented, but hasn't played it since her dad died
Blake Charles
-not a man of many words
-the star quarterback on the football team
-because he's quiet, girls consider him as "the bad boy", but in reality he makes good grades and follows the rules
-goes to all the parties but stays in the background - doesn't want to be considered a nerd for not going to them, but also doesn't want to draw attention to himself
-his brother is his best friend and the only one he can really talk to and be himself around
Hazel
-short, petite, and very shy
-reads and writes poetry in her spare time
-plays the lead role in the school musical
-has a beautiful voice and a passion for the piano
-average grades, except for her math grade - which is exceptionally high
-people think her odd because of her unusual taste in fashion
-looks out for her little brother
Pytanie #36:
Deterministic accumulation.
Of spatial pockets
and temporal packets
gathered there
a finite
if probable
sum
shifting dependent
spectrum red
or blue?
These gravity factories
getting hairy
when factoring the fourth
is a consideration
They
frame drag
with worm-hole nets
cast
and in the wake
dark flow
I need at least one other dimension
to mention
how badly a lie
is linear time
Pytanie #37:
a lot of my contacts have pretty much left Y!A, or stopped answering questions as often... hopefully I can get more than one answer for this question
first song is Future Ice-Age by the Italian power metal band, Synthphonia Suprema
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second is Isolation by the Greek melodic death metal band, Margin Of Existence
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third is Fall In The Dark by the Japanese power metal band, Glneryus (from their new album, with a new vocalist)
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fourth is Eternal Silence by the Australian melodic death metal band, Through Plagues
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fifth is Arm Yourself by the Canadian folk/melodic death metal band, Profugus Mortis (now known as Blackguard)
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MQ: thoughts on the songs?
BQ: what are some upcoming releases you are looking forward to? (for me, It's Poetry for the Poisoned by Kamelot, and a Judas Priest's Painkiller cover by Chthonic)
BQ2: what's your favourite band that's changed their name?
Pytanie #38:
I write poetry, lyrics, and music. I play trumpet and a little guitar. I'm into classic rock like Aerosmith, Zeppelin etc. I'm kinda shy but I really open up to people I know, and I am nice most of the time (but almost always nice to girls).
Pytanie #39:
Correction to the Goth questions...
Likes
• Painting
• Sketching
• Hardcore Rock(Mostly Indie)
• Hardcore Rap(Mostly Indie)
• Dark Colour(s)
• Politics
• Reading (Mostly html codes)
• Star Wars
• Active Feminism
• Poetry
• Sports
• Lingusitics
• INTERNET
• Studying Religion(s)
• Martial Arts
• Studying Culture
• Ninjas
• Anime
• Motorcycles
• Anti Fashion
• Studying Conspiracies
• Exotic Architecture
• Anything with wings
• Abstract Art
• Challenging reading material
• Finding beauty in negative spaces(lol! Seether: Grungiest album ever!)
• Ghetto Things
• Big Bling
• Skulls
• Dancing
• Headbanging
Dislikes
• Popular Music
• Hot Pink
• Orchid
• Dazzle Pink
• Cotton Candy
• Snikers(XP yuck!)
• Mini Skirts
• Dresses
• Picture Books
• Soap Operas
• "Jerseylicous"
• Jazz Music
• Black Eyed Peas
• Lady GaGa
• Jewelry
• Make-up
• Pale Skin(I'm black[Not bitter!])
• Pink frilly things
• Long hair
• "Ponies"
• Dating
• Pregnancy
• Marriage(I don't believe in that kind of "love")
• s*x
• Desperate housewives
• Fake nails
• Curlers, Brushes, combs
• Hair spray, mousse
• Stockings, fish net, and various others
• Garter Belts
• Frilly panties
• Wonder bras
• Perfume...a variety
• Scarves...multicolor
• Short skirts
• High heels...one to match each outfit
• V neck sweaters
• Low cut silk tops
• Hoop earrings
• Rings
• Bracelets
Does this make me "Goth", I'm confused!
Pytanie #40:
There is this boy I really like, he has a scene type haircut and listens to screamo and writes a lot of poetry. I have never been so smitten.
I told him I liked him and he said he liked talking to me but his feelings don't start to evolve until he really gets to know someone.
So we have talked a little bit here and there, but I never know what to say, so he ends up not replying, because most of my messages or comments turn out to be rhetorical.
What can I say now without looking like I'm just pulling things out of thin air to get him to talk to me? I invited him to a bring me the horizon concert but he hasn't gotten the message yet, we both love that band.
We also haven't hung out in the world outside of school where I occasionally see him. I am afraid to ask him to hang out since I already told him I like him and I don't want to sound desperate or stupid.
Any help would be amazing.
Pytanie #41:
Okay, just for fun (and 10 whole points!) I'm posting a poetry challenge.
Theme: Your favorite beverage
Rules:
-Poem must be a Sonnet
-The name of your favorite beverage MUST be used as an end-rhyme in the poem.
Pytanie #42:
What do you define as taboo?
i need a taboo topic for my poetry class
Thanks :)
Pytanie #43:
I'm quite an intellectual guy, I enjoy philosophy, poetry, classical music, psychology and physics. But i think there is something hilarious about farts, i generally used to do it in front of/on my girlfriend. Well, my ex girlfriend. coincidence? I think so : )
Kiss: your comment was unnecessary because I already pointed to that. oh and I would appreciate if nobody brought up me farting on my girlfriend being horrible. It was hilarious.. for both of us.
Pytanie #44:
I didn't write it:
We can speak only in metaphor of the eternal and infinite. If we wish to describe the indescribable, we can do so only by poetry. All endeavors to reach God by words resolve themselves into religious poetry. When we experience the hidden, the unfathomable, we can respond with the devoutness of silence—or with poetry and prayer we can sing of the ineffable.”
Thumbs down are not from me.
Pytanie #45:
Okay, I've loved the band Garbage since they appeared on the scene in the mid-90s. And every song Shirley Manson (she's the lead singer) has written I've related to, every single word. It's like she's reading my mind and making poetry out of my thoughts! Plus I think she's gorgeous and charismatic and she and I are a lot alike.
So I was thinking of getting a portrait of her in this pose:
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Only I was thinking of drawing MY hands holding a compact mirror but with her in the reflection peeking out at me. The hands would obviously be mine because I have other tattoos on my inner wrists and they would be drawn in with the picture.
What do you think?
Pytanie #46:
Ok I have toyed with this old time poem and want to know what you all think of it.. barring in mind I'm a crap poet . is it Ok or rubbish , I'll set the seen I'm a old man writing a letter to you all its about 1818 I think I not good a dates ........Ok this is my letter
My fellow poet's
How art thee today ?
England is in bloom on this fine afternoon,
Swallows in the skies ,O,er the hill's fly, ...Think not of them ...thou hast thy poetry too attend.
I shall sit in most Quiet mood today, and watch full-grown Lambs from hilly brook.
And dancing poppies ,like fresh red blood on crackling fire of flam like wood .
I will sit and dream in England's Beautiful land . and now its time to say good bey
will Earth it's self one day die Oh King of King's America See Ya
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Alfred , I no , if you read it ones more it gets better
Gary , Hi Emmmmm, What ?
Your poetry on war is good
Hi Blue lol I think it just gets better every time I read it thank you I just going to read it ones more. I love my own poetry
xxx
Happy, you might think about Swallos all the time if you are someone who loves birds ?
Pytanie #47:
So, Im starting to get into poetry, and I wrote a poem about backstabbing friends and I was wondering if you would like it!
We were friends, everything was fine.
Until that one day when apparently I just crossed the line.
I dont remember exactly what happened. It was all a blur.
I leave, and now your bestfriends with her.
What happened the time that i was away?
So what if i stayed an extra day.
You shouldve been waiting when I came back.
Now sincerity is one of the many things you lack.
All over a guy.
You think i might die
Without you in my heart.
The sad reality was I knew the friendship was crumbling apart.
Today some useful knowledge was earned.
Backstabbers only succeed when your back is turned.
Pytanie #48:
Ok well I met this guy on a poetry website. I've been talking to him for about 4 days and I really like him (like him, like him not just friends) he wants to text me but I'm afraid he'll find my area code and stalk me because he told me he was a hacker which isn't the same thing I know but they're vaguely connected (a white hat stalker). But he's on vacation and I haven't talked to him for a while and I really miss him! Should I do it?
Pytanie #49:
its not that its unattractive it just weirds me out with her depressive poetry and body jewelry. she has a lot of odd pets too. she is a wonderful girl that i love to bits but her new style is very much of a turnoff. she dyes her hair a new color every week and when we try to be intimate she says things that are a bit creepy. i don't want her to think i'm trying to change her or anything, just that its really hard to be turned on when she acts that way. how do i tell her?
Pytanie #50:
ok so im designing a cd cover for media studies and im kinda confused what the differences between underground poetry, undergound rap and underground hip hop is. Someone please explain im so confused. thanks.
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